A former bank robber trying to stay clean gets pulled back into the crime ring when a co-worker is out with a vengeance after complications with the last job.
I like the story a lot, but this logline could be compressed to link your two sub-plots together, such as: "A vengeful co-worker forces a former bank robber back into the crime ring after a messy end of their last job."
I like how this could end up very Quentin Tarantino Esque. But it needs a catchy title!
ReplyDeleteI think this script will be very interesting! I agree with Matt though, a catchy title could do your script well.
ReplyDeletewhoops! I meant David
ReplyDeleteI like the story a lot, but this logline could be compressed to link your two sub-plots together, such as: "A vengeful co-worker forces a former bank robber back into the crime ring after a messy end of their last job."
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