Blog #12

The strengths of the scene that I wrote were the action sequences.  They were very clear and easy to follow as well as desciptive enough for the reader to be able to visualize the scene as it was happening.  The whole point of using the scene that I did was to examplify the action sequences of my script.  The weaknesses of my script was the dialogue somewhat because it was broken up by the action it sometimes did not flow as well as it could have.  However, the script is still a rough draught so the fact that there are still a lot of mistakes with it does not suprise me.  I would probably go back through the script and make sure that the grammar and spelling are all correct.  I would probably also change some of the dialogue to make the conversation flow a little better.